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I agree with Amit hundred percent....even this poem if any known person happens to read....be careful....but to say the truth this poem has an outpour of emotion..nice10

Its true that poem is a sponteneous overflow of powerfull feelings. But you should remember and think twice before writting such things, may be you don't know some elderly person near to you, always cares for you, when you are in trouble. Always takes your side, when the world is against you. Always try to guide you, if he/she thinks that you are following a wrong path. He/she crys when you cry, and becomes the happiest person when you are happy. So if you write such a thing unknowingly, you are actually insulting that some one.

A nice poem expressing the need to be out of the clutches of the parents who r sometimes a bit over protective.