Tuesday, April 1, 2008

My Dilemma Comments

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Many a few I behold, talk
Sweet love to me
Through their eyes
Many others I meet, walk
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 March 2020

A pragmatic way to avoid temptations. So very true. An astute observation on people's behavior. Beautifully written.

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Luz Hanaii 18 January 2020

Very wise words, yes, one must be careful about these temptations as they affect our energy and may keep us tied.

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Sarah Cotnam 09 December 2009

I enjoy the play on talking and walking as a one-sided movement, thanks

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 February 2009

responding the way you want..the preconceived person you have in mind..what we realy speak is not we realy intend to..seems recorded..not natural

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Shimon Weinroth 23 November 2008

alas you are right, but with time comes a mellowing and perhaps we become more tolerant, a prodding poem of thoughtful 10+

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C T Heart 26 September 2008

I do understand you..... so hard to explain things which sometimes they turn a deaf ear.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 17 August 2008

Another beautiful poem...............

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Subbaraman N V 10 June 2008

There needs be no dilemma. Let us love all and serve all!

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Sadiqullah Khan 22 May 2008

you have good plots but for the watchful ones, , , , such good words, ,

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Sarah Abdullah 12 April 2008

One word... ....Insightful....

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 April 2008

i have a plot..........a plot to give you a 10 for this lovely piece

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Flora Gillingham 06 April 2008

I love the deceptive simplicity of your verse. Perhaps the plots can wait awhile. F

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Vaibhav Shah 06 April 2008

A good human understanding but many times we can not avoid these things and just allow ourselves to love these pretty emotions.But it ia a sensible advice to all those who just ruin themselves because of false praise and love in others' eyes.For example. Iago -a villain of Othello by Shakespeare comments about himself and says: 'I am not What I am' and King Claudius in Hamlet makes the same comment when he says: 'one may smile and smile and be a villain'. Good Job.

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Usha Pisharody 05 April 2008

I really did connect with this one too. You have an such ease with words that what you express transfers readily to the reader, and one is drawn into it, quite unknowingly. Really liked this one!

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Sreelekha Premjit 01 April 2008

Reminds me of Joggers Park... well said, loving eyes do hold a warning, don't they?

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Abha Sharma 01 April 2008

The dilemma is true coz it is difficult to reciprocate the words….the silent words are understood better….great lines…

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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