Tuesday, August 29, 2006

My Diamond Comments

Rating: 5.0

Got you in my mind,
I want you in my soul.
think my love is blind,
My heart you went and stole.
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David Darbyshire
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Preeti - is here! 05 September 2006

Loved how the poem ended Dave! And have to agree with TO, we all have so much experience in doing it wrong..we can write a book! Preets

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Nalini Hebbar 29 August 2006

great piece dave...a sweet love song...love...nalini

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Tranquil Ocean 29 August 2006

Ha ha...dont we all know how to do it wrong: -) Good one. TO

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Francesca Johnson 29 August 2006

Rivetting stuff, Dave. Where's it all coming from? ? Love, Fran the Fan xx

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I adore the last verse of this. t x

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