My Devotion Comments

Were your touch not soft or gentle, Your kiss both cold and blue. Rachel Ann Butler

wow, what a remarkable piece. devotion to one is an underlining word of neverending loyalty through love and respect. your words convey such greatness and move me to sigh with contentment.

you are really good....im just an amiture......hmmmmmm but i love this poem! ! !

I really enjoy this poem. You are very clever with words, Greenwolfe.

I have read the first 20 and certainly do enjoy your body of work thus far, I look forward to reading the rest! ~beau

This is beautiful =) Realmente hermoso!

Sounds like some good old fashioned blues to me man. Love it.

your awesome you know that. How old are you again?

good tempo and rhythm good read

you're devoted to your love ones........and that's pretty awsome GW.cool write.

the lines are touching and are penned from heart...yes there are moments of pain and gloominess but such are the ways of life...the credit lies in how we get through them...sooner the better..

My Favourite.10 +++++ Thank you.

A wonderful poem, indeed. It impacted my consciousness very much. No doubt, you are a skilled poet.

amazing poem powerful and uplifting<3

Thx for the hint. I really like this. Mostly cause it is beyond where I stand in life. It really opened a new mental window to me.

I really really like this one too, GW. keep writing ones like these! Peace&♥ Jade[d]

I agree with Alison. Keep up the good work.

Wow, this is very beautiful write with rhyms on it...you are the second poet i see who truly write poetry..well done Mr. Greenwolfe.

This is emotionally powerful Mr Wolfe, and like all your poems, very well constructed. The content isn't compromised at all... It speaks of love abiding and deep with great persuasion and the convinced reader is moved my such work.. as was I.. You are the real McCoy sir.

Another clear expression...thank you again.