My Destiny Song Comments

Another amazing poem..10!

Another amazing poem..10!

'O' melody queen Be my fortuneteller for lifetime And bring me luck each day With your lyrical expressions.' It is also a melodious poem. I love the above lines most,10+++

'o' melody queen - love this- we need her to wake up too and to walk at our side, you have a natural talent...well done

i am confusing whether to praise or not............ it is so beautiful that i have no words ++++++++++10

Destiny is sometime what we choose to do, and sometimes destiny is what we were meant to do.

destiny is what we choose to do with all the random things in life... Best wishes, Sabrina.

predestination is the word. nice

It sounds like you must have faith

Destiny to foretell all good things to you..nice write

nice one, Sameer: thanks

poetry has been transcripted n translated from your genes and is being expressed in your heart

Very well put together, filled with the hope andanticipation of the challenges of a new day 10

Pure enchantment, Sameer. Your metaphors are very original. I like what you see from your window on the world.10 for you. Warmest regards, Sandra

The tittle should have better been, 'O' Melody Queen'; all the same, thank you for sharing it with us. Edward Kofi Louis.

You have done well to express yourself in this and all that you desire of the world and life to be attained. Did find a couple of things though, hope you don't mind: You have the word, whiring... what do you mean? Is it meant to be whirring as in buzzing or humming? In the last verse you have 'Be my fortuneteller for lifetime' suggest...for a lifetime Also your first verse seems a bit disjointed through the second and third lines thus not tying everything together clearly. Is there something missing in this verse to express itself like the rest? Overall though, I enjoyed the read and the imagery and message that came forth. Well done. Many blessings to you

Once again you delivered a thought provoking poem. Good work! !

Amazing :) Just like a Fairy Tale. The best yet that I read from your writtings

Let God bless you with His divine light and melody.

I do believe that alarm clock can be unneccessary if you have faith and religion trusting god and angels will get you up safely back to earth believing in what god wants for you