Sunday, January 18, 2009

My Destiny Song Comments

Rating: 4.8

O' melody queen
Keep on whirring
And denting
Signature of a new day with your beak
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Sameer Ahmed
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Shiza Khan 08 June 2009

Another amazing poem..10!

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Shiza Khan 08 June 2009

Another amazing poem..10!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 31 May 2009

'O' melody queen Be my fortuneteller for lifetime And bring me luck each day With your lyrical expressions.' It is also a melodious poem. I love the above lines most,10+++

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 25 April 2009

'o' melody queen - love this- we need her to wake up too and to walk at our side, you have a natural talent...well done

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Muhammad Ali 31 January 2009

i am confusing whether to praise or not............ it is so beautiful that i have no words ++++++++++10

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Iris Washington 29 January 2009

Destiny is sometime what we choose to do, and sometimes destiny is what we were meant to do.

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destiny is what we choose to do with all the random things in life... Best wishes, Sabrina.

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Elizabeth Mpanga 28 January 2009

predestination is the word. nice

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Fred Babbin 27 January 2009

It sounds like you must have faith

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Indira Renganathan 27 January 2009

Destiny to foretell all good things to you..nice write

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Jagannath rao Adukuri 25 January 2009

nice one, Sameer: thanks

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poetry has been transcripted n translated from your genes and is being expressed in your heart

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Anthony Foster 21 January 2009

Very well put together, filled with the hope andanticipation of the challenges of a new day 10

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Sandra Fowler 21 January 2009

Pure enchantment, Sameer. Your metaphors are very original. I like what you see from your window on the world.10 for you. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 January 2009

The tittle should have better been, 'O' Melody Queen'; all the same, thank you for sharing it with us. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Marama Kelly 21 January 2009

You have done well to express yourself in this and all that you desire of the world and life to be attained. Did find a couple of things though, hope you don't mind: You have the word, whiring... what do you mean? Is it meant to be whirring as in buzzing or humming? In the last verse you have 'Be my fortuneteller for lifetime' suggest...for a lifetime Also your first verse seems a bit disjointed through the second and third lines thus not tying everything together clearly. Is there something missing in this verse to express itself like the rest? Overall though, I enjoyed the read and the imagery and message that came forth. Well done. Many blessings to you

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Luis Alvarado 20 January 2009

Once again you delivered a thought provoking poem. Good work! !

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Jen Shearer 20 January 2009

Amazing :) Just like a Fairy Tale. The best yet that I read from your writtings

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Ershad Mazumder 20 January 2009

Let God bless you with His divine light and melody.

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Margaret Harrison 20 January 2009

I do believe that alarm clock can be unneccessary if you have faith and religion trusting god and angels will get you up safely back to earth believing in what god wants for you

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Sameer Ahmed

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