My Destiny Song Poem by Sameer Ahmed

My Destiny Song

Rating: 4.8


O' melody queen
Keep on whirring
And denting
Signature of a new day with your beak
On murky glass of my window.

O' melody queen
Remain my alarm clock forever
And wake me up every morning
With your mellifluous tunes.

O' melody queen
Be my fortuneteller for lifetime
And bring me luck each day
With your lyrical expressions.




(1/18/2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iris Washington 29 January 2009

Destiny is sometime what we choose to do, and sometimes destiny is what we were meant to do.

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destiny is what we choose to do with all the random things in life... Best wishes, Sabrina.

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Elizabeth Mpanga 28 January 2009

predestination is the word. nice

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Fred Babbin 27 January 2009

It sounds like you must have faith

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Indira Renganathan 27 January 2009

Destiny to foretell all good things to you..nice write

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Shiza Khan 08 June 2009

Another amazing poem..10!

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Shiza Khan 08 June 2009

Another amazing poem..10!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 31 May 2009

'O' melody queen Be my fortuneteller for lifetime And bring me luck each day With your lyrical expressions.' It is also a melodious poem. I love the above lines most,10+++

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 25 April 2009

'o' melody queen - love this- we need her to wake up too and to walk at our side, you have a natural talent...well done

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Muhammad Ali 31 January 2009

i am confusing whether to praise or not............ it is so beautiful that i have no words ++++++++++10

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