Saturday, June 13, 2009

My Destiny Comments

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I think I know surely where I 'm living
though my thought's full with uncertainty
days and nights pass away unfriendly
without doing anything
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Bhaswat Chakraborty 15 June 2009

Very promising. The last stanza flows like a work of a veteran. Keep on writing some more good stuff.

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rago rago 13 June 2009

well penned......... my destiny sure will not be a destiny........

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rago rago 13 June 2009

well penned......... my destiny sure will not be a destiny........

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