My Desire Comments

every line creates a beautiful picture before the reader.superb thought loaded with emotions.

My feelings for you; with the muse of love and life. Nice work.

They all sound good like this one Evy nice work good job dave xxx

This poem has some lovely images in it and your emotions come across sincerely. It's great to someone so young dipping into his heart to share his feelings with the world. Keep writing Evy. Love, Alison

Evy, thank you for your note and so, I want to say that your poetry is full of intelligence and very good rhyme. Don't give up for lack of comments; people will discover you in time. Meanwhile, remember the old adage: to make a friend, you've got to be a friend.......... This poem is sweet and lovely in all the ways that count. Esther : ]

WOW ITS SO GOOD WHERE DID YOU COME UP WITH IT

Very sweet and loving poem Evy, we need more of your muse in the world. Love the title, I think it actually applies to us all. Smiling at you, Tai