Saturday, July 6, 2013

My Desire Comments

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Life is survived
till there is desire

I too have a desire
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ramesh rai
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Heather Wilkins 25 July 2013

a good write. we are all travelers we must ensure a peaceful and happy journey.

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Heather Wilkins 25 July 2013

a good write. we are all travelers we must ensure a peaceful and happy journey.

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Somanathan Iyer 23 July 2013

We have to leave peacefully after living peacefully. Beautiful concern for harmony. enjoyed reading.

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Passionate Reader 13 July 2013

but we must ensure a peaceful and delightful journey A beautiful message! ! ! love your philosophical poems! ! !

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Shahzia Batool 13 July 2013

the analogy of the world being a temporary resting place and human beings as travellers is aptly presented! ! !

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Sapna Agrawal 11 July 2013

desire that set expectations..... nice frame

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Hazel Durham 08 July 2013

We have to make our journey, one to remember, to learn and love as much as we can! Superb write and very thought provoking! !

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David Wood 08 July 2013

What a philosophical poem, we are all on the same road and we should look after each other.

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Tribhawan Kaul 08 July 2013

A lovely philosophical write. Life is a journey. Completing it with happiness and dignity is in our hands.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 July 2013

Oh yes i totaly agree with how u say we r passengers n life's a journey, wow what a wondrful poem! Yes i already read dat fine shazia's poem n i tink comentd it too. Thanx 4 d phrase vandematram fellow indian uncle poet.

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Lyn Paul 07 July 2013

What a beautiful journey you have set for your passengers. A great write.

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