Saturday, June 6, 2009

My Desguise Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Friday before the end of time
With everything I've left behind
Tomorrow will I live or die
With nothing more I wonder why
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christopher flynn
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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 June 2009

'I will learn to be small I will learn to capture all I will be tomorrows prize And learn to live with my disguise' Lovely poem with nice idea.10+++

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Sameer Ahmed 06 June 2009

A poem inspiring many directionless souls in a way that it has conceptualized the whole idealogy of disguising yourself from the evils of the society and stay in the main stream with positive attitude. The poem also conveys a very firm message that if one is in a situation he or she can't change then it is better to get use to it and try finding new ways living inside it rather go against it and finding short cuts......10/10

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