Friday, June 21, 2013

My Desert Comments

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A warm wind blowing lightly kicking up dust
Leaves of a mesquite tree swaying with rhythm
Stale water from a recent rain
Masked with a gleaming sun’s prism
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Oscar Robles
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Patricia Grantham 29 June 2013

A very nice poem about life in the desert. Even though the desert seems to be place where there is very little life or water it still manages to have some kind of existence. Even a cactus or a rattlesnake can be seen. The deserts of our life may seem be dry at times but we still manage to survive the tough times. A very thoughtful write.

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Ken E Hall 24 June 2013

Charming description of your dessert which has everything in it plus how you love it 'A love for life in this haven I've spent '...thanks for this...regards

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