Sunday, September 10, 2017

My Delusions Comments

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all men deserve to dream
and these are some of mine
a peace on earth that lasts
where harmony can shine
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 14 September 2017

Lovely dreams you have for mankind. Good thoughts are what we need and the rest will follow. But we have to begin with thinking positive. A thoughtful write.

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Practicing Poetess 10 September 2017

Not delusions, Barry, but dreams & desires of all decent men..... When a messed-up knee kept me housebound today, a friend brought us Chinese take-out food for lunch. The fortune in my cookie? Love is the most valuable thing in life. Peace, love & harmony. I'd say you nailed it in your poem!

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Nudershada Cabanes 10 September 2017

Beautiful poem with a beautiful message. We are all dreamers and we dream of a beautiful world where peace reign in all lands.

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Rajnish Manga 10 September 2017

I tried to spread the news that peace and love are all the only things of worth before the stars must fall....//.... the only race on earth is the human race.... so fight for what is right. The poem works its magic to the reader's heart with its great message. Thanks.

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