My Delight Comments

If the key is larger How the lock be opened beautiful lines.10 shan

you play the words with rhyming string, touching the cordae tendenie

Your delight is delightingly delightful Making us accept our defeat Before your play of words With a delighted smile! Angel

replete & laden with feelings and questions deeply thought out well written cheers and ten

Delightful read ends well indeed.

This is quite lovely and meaningful. I enjoyed it very much. '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

Complex with deep meaning good write

Complex with deep meaning good write

But my delight loves Defeated by you This makes the key fit into the lock. Ecstatic poetry. CP

Beautiful poem very well 'composed'. Interesting end - 'Should I think larger? But my delight loves Defeated by you' - I like it. I am admiring the lightness of the feather and the economy of words which are saying very a lot.(10v.) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

simple and nice. good choice of words.

''As I always love To unlock the mystery'' remarkable words.....10+++

Economy of words. Great expresssion.

Dlighted by the my delight......... let unlock the greater things always wide open is the universe...........

Like the flow Complex.... good write

On your tiny meanness Off-white error yawns Spreading dark wings Like the house owner what a sweet and meaningful stanza i this... tken from your rich and very good poem... love this poem 10++++++++++

the display of words is wonderful. good poetry.

a delightful poem with amazing metaphors. I particularly like the opening and the last stanza. 10 Mamta

this is a Great Writing.

a mysterious poem...the great ones always have a key which fit any door..i think that key will un lock her mystery...beautiful poem demand readers to knock it's door...10++++ If the key is larger How the lock be opened With this pure logic You are greater than me As I always love To unlock the mystery Taking tranquilizer Should I think larger? But my delight loves Defeated by you