Tuesday, June 11, 2013

My Deep Sleep.. Comments

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My deep sleep..
here, we meet
flung the stuffy hesitated
to the longing smile that embarrassed
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adheez van der beanthz
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Patricia Grantham 25 July 2013

Many of us have have dreamed of something or someone that we wished to be reality. Then on the other hand they can be terrifying that we are happy that it was only just a dream. Hope this one comes true. Very deep and solemn write.

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Ramesh Rai 17 June 2013

beautiful compose. liked it

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Owain Glyn 12 June 2013

It is often the case that sleep is not only a comfort but also the place where the deepest wishes become manifest.

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