My Decietful Angel Comments

All the poems of yours that I've read from A to Z are just breath taking. The rhyme scheme that's in every poem. You get your point across in every stanza.. and in some of these poems I almost cried because i know who they are about. and some of the comments that were left on the heartbreaking ones are pretty depressing i have such a great urge to tell you that i'm sorry for all the heart break that i've given and all that I've done to you over the time that we've been together. You've always deserved the best, and at times i feel that that's not what i'm giving you. You deserve so mmuch better than me. You don't deserve heartbreak no betrayal no nothing that would bring you to tears. There's this man that i fell in love with a while back, a man that until this day i will fight for, bleed for die for. There is no other man but you. ~ Mrs.Wingfield

I love the tag, Deceitful Angel. It moved well and your structure was good. After reading your profile, I would have expected darker. It seems to hover. Not that you forced it, but may have been numb when writing it. I read about love and heartbreak, and while I can relate completely, that's what I did, relate, not feel yours. It's a passionate subject, love, betrayal, abandonment. Your rhyme scheme was great. You didn't betray it, and that's a tough balance, wanting to say something, and having to be particular about your words. Overall, good piece. Thanks for sharing.