You were my happiness,
but now my misery.
My truth, but now- lies;
my only dream
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Jane, I have just read thru all your poems. You have a developing talent which I will watch with keen interest. I hope you continue to write - your style is both unique and very good! Rgds, Ivan
There is no need to feel so miserable! Let us face the life boldly and learn to reconcile to the realities of life which provides greater peace!
I agree w/ Ivan Donn Carswell. You're writing is really unique. I love your writing and so do a whole lot of my friends [Not on Poemhunter but my friends were over at my house and I showed them ur poems. They luved em too! ! ! ! ] luvs! Skye<3 xx Keep up the good work!