My Death Comments

it is expressed in sad feelings, hard-times are the worst.. Yet wonderful.

wow... dark, yet wonderfully written... filling with emotions.. I like it...10+++

i love it, its great....... and it is flowing with emotion... keep writing, and ill keep reading....10++

Tres bien! I love this poem by you. Very dark and beautiful and full of emotion and extremely captivating/ 10++ Continue writing, you're wonderful at it.

this my dear poet is a well written poem. you evoked the emotions so well. my heart goes out to you.

The 'I can''s seem somewhat repetitive, but that is quickly overshadowed by the pure deep originality of the piece, it is beautifully written and dark