Thursday, September 18, 2008

My Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I lay dying,
My heart is weak,
Weak as it can be.
I see my blood,
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Osvaldo Govea
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Joseph ... 02 October 2008

I thought it was really good,10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 18 September 2008

a poem on near death experiences....like seeing the spiralling down tunnel etc.Very well expressed in simple words; ; ; 10

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Tanya Stanford 18 September 2008

This one gave me cold shivers all the way down my back that's how good you wrote it. Very good use of words

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