I am forced to bow down to your will.
I am forced to follow your laws.
I am forced to watch as my brothers are separated.
And most of all I am forced to call you Uncle.
                
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you asked me to comment byt after reading this one i dont knoe what to say. looks like a familt thing you wrote in there. you have expressed your feelings well for one so young. i wish you well and keep writing if that makes you feel good. God Bless.

 
                     
                
tribal and feral.... makes for an interesting read if contextualized... well done :)