Wednesday, February 15, 2012

My Dearest Uncle Comments

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I am forced to bow down to your will.
I am forced to follow your laws.
I am forced to watch as my brothers are separated.
And most of all I am forced to call you Uncle.
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Kelsea Osterman
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Saadat Tahir 23 February 2012

tribal and feral.... makes for an interesting read if contextualized... well done :)

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eloida Capuno 18 February 2012

you asked me to comment byt after reading this one i dont knoe what to say. looks like a familt thing you wrote in there. you have expressed your feelings well for one so young. i wish you well and keep writing if that makes you feel good. God Bless.

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