I will never forget you my dearest soulmate..
these old meomries will never fade...
you've always laid me in your shade...
whenever I trembled or felt afraid....
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A poem that reveals the dexterity of the poet in poem writing!
I enjoy the premise of the poem, but the meter needs tuning in my opinion.
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Despite the few spelling mistakes, this is a very sweet love poem for a soulmate.
so please reach out for me and offer some aid... to a heart broken girl who has always prayed.... to be blessed with the fate... of seeing you once again before it gets too late......marvelous. A great poem!
wow so filled with love. good job i like it....and i know you must get tired of me saying this, lol, but stay strong and ill pray for you.
I realy liked reading your peoms and i know where you are coming from on some of them. This poem touched me the most in the heart and hope that mine will to the same to you.
Clearly a very heartfelt, emotional poem. No punches pulled. Nostalgic. Self-critical. Great write. Paul.
That was a very good poem....I liked it a lot....keep writing....
I loved it. even gave it a 10 in rating. i think it was awesome. i like the lifeless blade part alot.
hi emo! i guess you were right this one is really great i like it keep on
Nice poem! i like it! ^_^ no wonder you're the top two 'famous' poets here! i tell you that you're one of those few promising poets out there! ^_^ oh btw, if you're going to ask me, i think i've fallen for your personality ^_^ so dont call yourself EMO GIRL... maybe LADY INNOCENT suits you best... ;) i'm looking forward on your new poems! if you dont mind, i would appreciate it if you visit my poems too... I'm looking forward to be your friend! -Ganni
Beautiful poem, never lose sight of that which you yearn for.
A touchy poem. I could feel the sentiments of the poet.