Monday, January 14, 2008

My Dearest Soulmate Comments

Rating: 4.2

I will never forget you my dearest soulmate..
these old meomries will never fade...
you've always laid me in your shade...
whenever I trembled or felt afraid....
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emo girl
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Poetic Sky 29 May 2023

A touchy poem. I could feel the sentiments of the poet.

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Craig Moses Uche 26 May 2023

Nice piece. Very nice

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A poem that reveals the dexterity of the poet in poem writing!

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Robert Alyea 10 November 2022

I enjoy the premise of the poem, but the meter needs tuning in my opinion.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 March 2022

Despite the few spelling mistakes, this is a very sweet love poem for a soulmate.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 February 2022

so please reach out for me and offer some aid... to a heart broken girl who has always prayed.... to be blessed with the fate... of seeing you once again before it gets too late......marvelous. A great poem!

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O Anna Niemus 08 June 2008

this is a sweet poem

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(: God's Wild Child :) 06 June 2008

wow so filled with love. good job i like it....and i know you must get tired of me saying this, lol, but stay strong and ill pray for you.

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Steven Christison 02 June 2008

I realy liked reading your peoms and i know where you are coming from on some of them. This poem touched me the most in the heart and hope that mine will to the same to you.

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Sadiqullah Khan 22 May 2008

though the form is ok but the emotions are good....

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Paul Butters 11 May 2008

Clearly a very heartfelt, emotional poem. No punches pulled. Nostalgic. Self-critical. Great write. Paul.

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Wendy Collison 24 April 2008

That was a very good poem....I liked it a lot....keep writing....

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Daniel Wheeler 27 March 2008

I loved it. even gave it a 10 in rating. i think it was awesome. i like the lifeless blade part alot.

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Abdelmajid Seghir 23 March 2008

hi emo! i guess you were right this one is really great i like it keep on

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Geovanni Leaño 10 February 2008

Nice poem! i like it! ^_^ no wonder you're the top two 'famous' poets here! i tell you that you're one of those few promising poets out there! ^_^ oh btw, if you're going to ask me, i think i've fallen for your personality ^_^ so dont call yourself EMO GIRL... maybe LADY INNOCENT suits you best... ;) i'm looking forward on your new poems! if you dont mind, i would appreciate it if you visit my poems too... I'm looking forward to be your friend! -Ganni

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Anonymous *plz comment! * 30 January 2008

i love it! ! its a great poem

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 30 January 2008

so beautiful and heartfelt poem

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Erik Rodriguez 25 January 2008

Beautiful poem, never lose sight of that which you yearn for.

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