My Dearest One Comments
I listen to the breeze rustling the scattered autumn leaves,
I see the dappled clouds as they weave,
A pattern across the sulking skies,
I hear the birds sing and chatter without any lies,
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Nature, explodes around along with natural emotions entwined in love of both.
A lovely romantic poem well penned to capture the bliss of love in a mutual loving relationship. Nicely articulated and written in poetic diction. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and MERRY CHRISTMAS.
How beautiful! So much in sync with my thoughts as well. Thanks for sharing your beautiful creation
A lovely penning on realization about nature, people and love.
Raw emotion, once again, painted with colourful and descriptive vocabulary. Some beautiful touches contained in this poem Hazel. Well done.
as the whispering wind asks me to feel the warmth of the sun and the joy of being with you vw=ery nice
A nice p[ickle tasty - love and emotion enter woven thank you
A nice p[ickle tasty - love and emotion enter woven thank you
Dearest one is ever affectionate. Deep affection shines in this poem in each word. Nice writing.
I like this poem bescause I find myself all through its tone
Excellent write Hazel. Your words put us right into each picture. So many great lines.
Beautiful description compounded with love and emotion, a lovely poem........10
As I grasp the sometimes warm hand of life with expectation, I listen to our hearts sing with desire and sensation, When love sprouts in the heart, everything is clothed in a new sensation! The Earth and all things in Nature put on a new beauty and life seems to pass through untrodden newer tracks! ! Holding the hand of the beloved, you are ready to climb even the highest mountain! That is the magic of love! Enjoyed!
I really enjoyed the dreamy like tone of this poem; the various humane emotions and feelings, are beautifully described by the lovely use of simile and the flow, making it a heart-warming poem!
Love is holding hands as our hearts merge, Like blades of grass on a straight verge, Beautifully presented love poem shared on. Nicely penned.
Hazel this is just beautiful the last three lines in particular are so beautiful as always you draw the reader in as you weave your magic beautiful
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I listen to our hearts sing with desire and sensation, As the whispering wind asks me to feel the warmth of the sun And the joy of being with you, My dearest one. A beautiful poem, nicely written.