Sunday, June 17, 2012

My Dear Sister Comments

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You'll grow up one day my dear sister
and you'll realize the beautiful world you see
is a pale love of those who greed
the blue sky you see these days
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Arta Krasniqi
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Daniel Brick 28 August 2015

This is a painful poem to read as I'm sure it was to write. It's one thing to confront the evil and danger in the world for ourselves but to know that the same fate looms in the future of a loved one - and we cannot prevent it - is - well, your poem expresses the grief more eloquently than my words. In the long run of things, this poem is PROMISE to your sister, and a promise to yourself, that family love means neither of you will be alone. I only have a twin sister - no other siblings - and that relationship of almost seven decades may be the most lasting blessing of my life. You have the same blessing to look forward to. And so ends my catechism, as Shakespeare put it!

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 July 2015

compelling and creative.

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Arta Krasniqi 05 October 2012

Know* drop* Sorry for grammatical mistakes...

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A poignant write...with a powerful warning to a beloved sibling...~FjR~

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Poignant write, yet a loving sibling warning...The world need not be so filled with anathema and conspiracy...if only we all would buy into the bold fact that in the end...our ultimate destinies are the same...Stellar Write ~FjR~

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