MY dear rusting diamond,
Who are you trying to fool,
You say you fall in love fast,
But all you do is use i love you as a tool,
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Serioulsy i loooove your poems! They are so true and deep.Continue with your writing and Im looking forward to the next poem ^^
there is something here to like. i don't understand all of it and i don't get that two lines seem to be combined into one......but all you....as a tool. and i would write your/not you're. i'll look at another one. thanks for sharing.