With blunt of words, you slice the brick-kiln baked.
With crackers of humour, you light the fact.
With sprinkle of spices, you bring tears of rain.
With nuclear pen you fire words of neutron.
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Hi Mam thanks for your comments in fact they were compliments for me, poetry is all about free flow of words, if not its not poetry at all. if words find hard to flow..thoughts would tend to escape as sir keats states if poetry should come it should come as leaves to plants...if not -not at all. Regards Rao
I want to Thank each one of you with all my heart for the valuable comments. I do appreciate and respect your comments. Thanks a lot.....
You have nicely put a poet's feelings. A poet gathers and arranges words with a certain idea in mind, while the reader may interpret it entirely differently. Once the poem takes its shape it is left to the readers to interpret the collection of words. Let every interpretation be positive. Thank you for a beautiful poem. I also thank you for all your kind words about several of my poems.
Very interesting poem Geeta written with great imagination. I am trying to go behind these words but knowing one's mind is a daunting task and so is expressing what goes on in one's mind. Accepting my limitations I will just say that enjoyed this write. Haven't done cross word puzzle for a long time! Thank you so much for your appreciative comment on my poem.
I couldn't take a single bite of red Kashmiri apple, as I saw my beloved's face in it. Now I should never tell beautiful flow of words from your pen A portrait of beauty brush love in words
Beautiful write Geetha and thank you for your wonderful comments on my poems, I really appreciate it!
A Creative and compelling composition with qualitative questions my friend! !
A Creative and compelling composition with qualitative questions my friend! !
dear poet, The poetic imagery is often out of the reality. It is not a matter of any concern. Thanks for your appreciation on my poem.
PH A real platform for all poets...its nice..when other sites compel to write comments, in PH its our heart that tells us to comment on creative writing....beautiful write
I think I am going to get a Big Bang from you all. So I will just keep silence...... no need to be carried away....10 just ask no favor and earn the honor i find poem hunter refuge for all rounders Poem hunter too favor such tactic That is against spirit and basic New poets should be encouraged Daily ranking should be stopped or discouraged
Thank you so much for this wonderful poem. The contents are valid. I really appreciate your comments on my poems.
lovely write. thanks dear Geetha for reading and commenting on my work. I appreciar=te very much heather
Geetha my dear - I appreciate you for cleverly kissing and killing at a time.. Ha Ha Ha.We all in the PH club are good friends in deed and truly we learn a lot by interacting. Thank you for your openness what I love in fact.
This poem is a rejoinder to the common strategies adopted by poets at large. It is your own poem rightly addressed to many of those who possess mercurial identities. A few days later, you may enjoy the words now reprimanding you not aimed at tarnishing you, Geetha.As usual you are outspoken and blatant here.. A good write indeed.
Geetha, we are all poets and it is the poets' art to say something and mean different.... They can make the trivial- significant and the significant.. silly! Though I cannot closely follow your stream of thought, this poem makes a very enjoyable read especially lines on the 'the lad who went to seek his lass and is still missing'!
mam there's a new poem of mine VISION OF INDIA pls feel to read.. Regards Rao