Tuesday, July 20, 2010

My Dear Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my heart, a trail
And footprints, my dear, you left
The prints, the impressions you made
In my life, my heart, you live
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David Beckham
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Cody Williamson 23 July 2010

A very honest poem of friendship, as they eb and flow over life. Excellent piece! Keep it up!

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Keli Mims 23 July 2010

Wonderful. I like it and I can relate. It's nice. Keep on writting.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 20 July 2010

WOW! David I enjoyed the lyrics but your style if great! Your words just flow across and down the page like silk.Thanks for sharing.Keep writing.

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Marina Gasbey 20 July 2010

How very forlorn, but at the same time Affectionate and loving... You to have captured the art of both feelings, and they complete one another, in a dance you might say. A dance of Poetry. :) This was a very impressionable poem! Thank you for letting me, and others read this work!

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David Beckham

David Beckham

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