I heard that you had passed away
I have no words, on what to say
Heartbroken, disturbed and also sad,
I wish you never went away
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a moving poem and nicely expressed tribute to a brother...well penned....10
i can relate to your loss...a genuine write for a genuine friend by a genuine heart
You have converted your emotions into words very well! Nice poem!
This is a really touching poem, well thought out and I love the rhyme scheme.10+
hI lILo, I can feel how much you've missed your friend.Impressive writes dear.
You write very well, this is a really heartfelt poem written with lots of love. 10+
you filed this withthe right emotions. very touching.... fantastic poem and you got talent too.
This one is filled with emotions... I like your emotions here.... this genuine poem coming from the core of your heart.. nicely expressed, very simple, free flowing language too.... with love shan
A VERY PERFECTLY WRITTEN POEM MY FRIEND YOU REALLY LET OUT YOUR EMOTIONS HERE A WELL DESERVED 10! ............
A lovely tribute, heartfelt words, 10 Lynda x