Thursday, August 13, 2009

My Dear Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

I heard that you had passed away
I have no words, on what to say
Heartbroken, disturbed and also sad,
I wish you never went away
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lilo chico
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Lynda Robson 21 August 2009

A lovely tribute, heartfelt words, 10 Lynda x

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Sally Plumb Plumb 20 August 2009

A lovely memorial poem.

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Danielle G. 19 August 2009

Beautiful! *sniffle*

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Ency Bearis 18 August 2009

a moving poem and nicely expressed tribute to a brother...well penned....10

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Steven S 14 August 2009

What a wonderful tribute. Sorry for your loss.

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Chitra - 14 August 2009

i can relate to your loss...a genuine write for a genuine friend by a genuine heart

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 August 2009

You have converted your emotions into words very well! Nice poem!

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Michael Moorcroft 14 August 2009

This is a really touching poem, well thought out and I love the rhyme scheme.10+

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 August 2009

hI lILo, I can feel how much you've missed your friend.Impressive writes dear.

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Bob Blackwell 14 August 2009

You write very well, this is a really heartfelt poem written with lots of love. 10+

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you filed this withthe right emotions. very touching.... fantastic poem and you got talent too.

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Shashendra Amalshan 13 August 2009

This one is filled with emotions... I like your emotions here.... this genuine poem coming from the core of your heart.. nicely expressed, very simple, free flowing language too.... with love shan

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Carol Gall 13 August 2009

wonderful poem about a friend forever

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Christopher Cofield 13 August 2009

Simple & beautiful, lovely display of emotion.

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Jose Murguia 13 August 2009

A VERY PERFECTLY WRITTEN POEM MY FRIEND YOU REALLY LET OUT YOUR EMOTIONS HERE A WELL DESERVED 10! ............

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