How you listened through my mother’s womb,
I was also listening to your voice,
Your touch on the womb,
I felt your gentle palm passing over my world.
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Poetry is a good way to show appreciation and you've done it perfectly. Good work
Your touch on the womb, I felt your gentle palm passing over my world. How you whispered as if you were sure I was listening. All fathers do that and wait for the big day. nicely put. beautiful lines.
Your appreciation to your dad is a clear indication that your dad was a caring dad. God bless him for this great responsibility. Nice poem Lechoe
Thanks Charity.