Saturday, July 14, 2012

My Dear Child Comments

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You were a product of poor environment.
You were given no chance,
You were given no hope,
Destined to be held captive,
In a prison of flesh and bone.
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H.J. Shreeve
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Khairul Ahsan 09 April 2014

I am so sad to read your poem, though I did not understand it fully. On whose loss are you mourning here? What exactly do you mean by 'You were a product of poor environment'? May his soul rest in peace!

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H.J. Shreeve

H.J. Shreeve

Hobart, Tasmania
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