Monday, September 5, 2016

My Days Are Frozen Comments

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My heart sings
Never ending melancholic songs
My soul pines
Tinged with pain and grief
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v.m.saraswathy munuswamy
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Anil Kumar Panda 05 September 2016

It is life. But there is no greater grief than missing ones guide in life. Following the path shown by him will perhaps the greatest tribute. May his soul rest in peace. Nice emotional drop.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 05 September 2016

thanks dear, i too console the same way, yes parents are our guardian angles, thanks poet

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 September 2016

My soul pines! ! Father; missing you. Death is part of us as human beings. May his soul rest in peace. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 05 September 2016

sure to pray as you said, and follow the righteous life, thanks dear poet

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2016

During death in sorrow life acquires place and life becomes joyless. But death is truth and all should agree to accept. Love in bond with eternal father is nice and truth. This we have to remember. Nice sharing.10

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 05 September 2016

thanks a million dear sir, very true, the void or emptiness given by the departed beloved souls, ....no words to express, but life has to move on for the other souls who depend on us, thanks again

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