Sunday, May 19, 2013

My Daydreams Leave Me Blind Comments

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All of these things inside my head, all the worlds inside my mind
All of the living and the dead, but to this world I’m almost blind
All of the creatures born anew, all of the monsters of the night
All of these things I wish were true, remove my truth from my own sight
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Tim Vallie
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Julie Schleppegrell 06 June 2013

Sounds like a good imagination. Writing them down just as this could be what they are for

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..... W@king Up..... 20 May 2013

Wow this kept me enthralled all the way! Nice rhyming too :) great work!

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Payal Parande 19 May 2013

the dreams which are better than the reality and makes you feel special about your self though they are not true....but yet you can't get rid of them cause deep inside you have a hope that they will come true...............again a marvelous piece a great job sir

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Tim Vallie

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