My Day Starts With You. Comments

Dear Poet Amartya…painted nicely the ‘young-age-love-emotive’…canvas Enjoyed 10//10++ Ms. Nivedita UK PS Write more please

hi Amartya, nice way of expressing love, keep it up... that zing is very important which i could feel in your poem.....

The language skills you have, makes you swing the way you want to. It's excellent keep on writing don't stop there as you are an asset..

I started writing poetry at around the same age as you and I can see a real talent here. All the metaphors you have used with the ellipis make this a really beautiful poem about a teen's 'infatuation.' Well done. Keep on writing.

well constructed words......

An adolescent's infatuation. CP