Friday, May 30, 2008

My Day Begins Comments

Rating: 3.1

Covered under a blanket, night retreats,
Hands nestle, trying to capture warmth.
Sun uncovers earth from brooding bitterness.
Sudden flutter of wings from darkness,
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Satheesan Rangorath
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Rema Prasanna 12 June 2008

My day begins is a beautiful write, gentle and eloquent,10 for this

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Kesav Easwaran 02 June 2008

a very good poem satheesan! the last stanza brings to light the romantic poet in you! keep posting more poems.*10*

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Satheesan Rangorath

Satheesan Rangorath

Elappulli, Palakkad, Kerala, India
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