Tuesday, August 11, 2009

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I woke up
the four walls taunting

I sat up
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Silvia Jen
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Afzal Shauq 14 August 2009

woke up Yesterday repeats No, I'll hibernate In my sleep searching the door to Tomorrow yes time is passing ahead and never repeat.. and how you expressed here is alos interesting..lovely poem with lovely idea and i liked it too..wonderful..and let me say well done..10/10

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Ben Burgess 12 August 2009

very well written a pleasure to read

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