Friday, June 13, 2014

My Daughter Simi Comments

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Vacationing child Simi toying leisure
Plays the games with nursery pleasure,
Airing joys trifling numerous,
Till the fairy of sleep appears.
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shuvo chakraborty
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Phrases like ‘toying leisure', ‘nursery pleasure' convey little. mundane. Could do better..

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