Sunday, January 7, 2018

My Daughter's Poem For Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Have I ever told you that your crescent smile is the full moon's other half?
- that when you open my black empty wallet, you'll see your photograph?
- that despite all that we're going through, when I'm with you I always laugh?
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Jazib Kamalvi 25 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Jesus. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Bharati Nayak 10 January 2018

Have I ever told you that your crescent smile is the full moon's other half? - that when you open my black empty wallet, you'll see your photograph? - that despite all that we're going through, when I'm with you I always laugh? A wonderful poem on father-daughter bonding.

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Jesus llorico 04 May 2018

Thank you Ms Bharati Nayak, for your wonderful comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 January 2018

Such a heartwarming write... a huge 10+++

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Jesus Llorico 04 May 2018

Thank you Mr Bernard Asuncion for your exceptional comment.

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