Thursday, July 8, 2010

My Dates Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have a date
I ran fifty miles to meet my girl
I forgot my watch, my cloths my hair in curl
She is late
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issam hal
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Anjali Sinha 28 July 2012

will someone please explain why so many hurdles one has to cross to win over his or her love? ? ? ? ? great and hilarious poem--you know-I simply loved this. anju

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 09 July 2010

Wow that's deep, it hurt me to read that, but a great story.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 July 2010

Poetry of dilemma and denial…such stuff [read gal] are like so…poetically viable as it is virtual…in reality your emotion passion are but zero value to them… Better kick [is equal to ignore] them…even multiple marathon runs will prove futile and sterile though you’ve date…better turn over calendar page for next date to for a candid gal…. thanks for such a melancholy poem… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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O why does love have to be so complicated! So enjoyed the read, , ending was brilliant. Goo one; D

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