Sunday, October 12, 2008

My Darling Wife Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Goodnight' my darling he whispered, as he perched himself on the bed,
'I was thinking of you today, you know, about the day we wed.
You looked so pure and perfect, like a cherub upon a cloud,
Approaching me from down the isle. you made me feel so proud.
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lindsey ashton
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Marilyn Lott 25 November 2008

Absolutely beautiful, Lindsey. You are a great story teller with so much emotion and compassion. Keep writing! Another '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Fiona Davidson 24 November 2008

Beautifully written tale of devotion...loved it...thank you...Fi

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Patricia Gale 22 November 2008

Such love and devotion, a heart touching piece.

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May Namoc 24 October 2008

aaawwww, so sad yet soo beautiful! Well done lindsey! i love the rhyming and the story was mezmerizing. you've got a knack for poems with story and its amazing/ what a wonderful piece you've bestowed upon us all. keep writing lindsey! ! love your work! May

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Alan Duffield-lock 22 October 2008

WOW this is a lovely beautifully rhyming and sentimental poem well done alan x

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Billy Joe Collins 22 October 2008

i can see the feelings come deep from youe heart very nice poem

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Aden orie 12 October 2008

awesome ryming, and also alot of feeling! i like how it changes your thaughts, because its really deep! good write

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lindsey ashton

lindsey ashton

wigan, manchester UK
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