'Goodnight' my darling he whispered, as he perched himself on the bed,
'I was thinking of you today, you know, about the day we wed.
You looked so pure and perfect, like a cherub upon a cloud,
Approaching me from down the isle. you made me feel so proud.
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Beautifully written tale of devotion...loved it...thank you...Fi
aaawwww, so sad yet soo beautiful! Well done lindsey! i love the rhyming and the story was mezmerizing. you've got a knack for poems with story and its amazing/ what a wonderful piece you've bestowed upon us all. keep writing lindsey! ! love your work! May
WOW this is a lovely beautifully rhyming and sentimental poem well done alan x
i can see the feelings come deep from youe heart very nice poem
awesome ryming, and also alot of feeling! i like how it changes your thaughts, because its really deep! good write
Absolutely beautiful, Lindsey. You are a great story teller with so much emotion and compassion. Keep writing! Another '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn