My darling Amy,
I stand here every day,
I know you will no longer feel pain,
Because you have gone away.
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Dear Josie, A very moving Poem, such sorrow and deep loss, time will mellow the feelings only time has such great healing power, thank you for sharing your beautiful and sad poem. Love from David
This poem is personal, powerful, and emotional. But thats about it. Now that's a lot. But poems need something other than emotion to be memorable and ultimately meaningul beyond the emotions they create. That's why I gave this a 7. In the end, sadness needs beauty more than tears. GW62