Friday, June 15, 2007

My Darling Amy Comments

Rating: 4.6

My darling Amy,
I stand here every day,
I know you will no longer feel pain,
Because you have gone away.
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Josie Brooks
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Greenwolfe 1962 07 June 2008

This poem is personal, powerful, and emotional. But thats about it. Now that's a lot. But poems need something other than emotion to be memorable and ultimately meaningul beyond the emotions they create. That's why I gave this a 7. In the end, sadness needs beauty more than tears. GW62

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Dipy Hermonite 31 July 2007

One can feel the sadness. Beautifully expressed.

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David Taylor 19 June 2007

Dear Josie, A very moving Poem, such sorrow and deep loss, time will mellow the feelings only time has such great healing power, thank you for sharing your beautiful and sad poem. Love from David

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Colin J... 15 June 2007

Moving and sad, Keep the good thoughts. Colin J...

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