Friday, December 6, 2013

My Dark Side Comments

Rating: 2.5

So there is a monster
That resides in my soul
And I feed it like fire needs coal
For the pain never ends
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Angel Of The Night
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Khairul Ahsan 23 January 2014

The devilish dark side has been portrayed well in this poem, with angel like honesty. 'So when you see my dark side Hell wont look so bad' - My God! That's dangerously demonic!

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 07 December 2013

good imagery that expressed very well well done

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