Thursday, December 19, 2013

My Dark Prince Comments

Rating: 4.0

you brought me out, you healed my pain
but to you there wasnt anything to gain
you did it out of the goodness of your heart
somehow i knew you were the one from the start
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Cynthia Carpenter
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Kim Barney 29 June 2016

Very pleasing poem. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2016

Very interesting and amazing poem shared definitely. Having love for dark prince is definitely precious.10

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Rajnish Manga 29 June 2016

Lovely articulation and expression of feelings about one who brought love in your life. Thanks. ....my dark prince you resqued me ....you pushed away the darnkness and set me free ....only to capture and steal my love

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M Asim Nehal 29 June 2016

Excellent poem, inspiring and soothing. Congrats for the poem of the day.

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Joseph Harlacher 29 June 2016

the light we see by is but shadows to truth & love for life while alive.

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M Asim Nehal 29 June 2016

I agree

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Joseph Harlacher 29 June 2016

not dark at all nice work

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 June 2016

You healed my pain! ! Love and care. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chinedu Dike 18 September 2014

Lovely poem from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Daniel Brick 04 September 2014

LET US BE TOGETHER UNTIL WE DIE TOGETHER WE WILL BE JOINED IN THE SKY - there is a wonderful expansion of their love in these lines. First it will last until death - that means life long renewal - and their love has a cosmic dimension. These are larger-than-life emotions which take love to a higher plane where (for example) the divorce statistics in the USA are irrelevant. And addressing the beloved as MY DARK PRINCE adds to this gratitude that makes this love untouched by ordinary setbacks and diminishing returns. Long may it prosper!

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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2014

A nice poem, a yearning for love in clear and simple words.

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Gary H 19 January 2014

Very nice, well done.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 16 January 2014

very nice............well composed.............I only see love everywhere..............

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Gajanan Mishra 19 December 2013

love you for ever, good write, thanks.

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Cynthia Carpenter

Cynthia Carpenter

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