My Dark Nights Comments

A haunting experience… good poem… something about the horrid past indicated in a few thin skilful lines, but the poem dwells on the present… metaphors merge in the poetry good

At the distant verge of the horizon slowly submerging is the weary Sun with reddened face bidding grudging adieus to his day long drudging brooding over mandatory next come! ....brilliant beginning. A beautiful poem is so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

a fantastic write Sathya, enjoyed reading your poem thank you Alan

Beautiful description, insightful imaginary! !

Wonderful Poem. Well done I like your great imagination. Thanks

I lifted my right hand aloft! Nay, he didn't stop! I wept! As fear reemerging... Well done, nice work!

The dark thickets of moonless night Are thickening my tiresome thoughts very poetic lines with lots of imagery and words that suit to it....... like your poem very much dear poet........ thank you. tony

This is cool!

Very true of many lives

Yes, I agree that it's really meaningful poem...Merna.

really a poem with meanings. wonderful write. voted10 surya

In the mind you have opened up the bed chamber of dark nights which I'm sure everyone has experienced... and carved out reality dreams with stark reality...++++++10 regards an' thanks

I come away from this writing with a feeling of an altered state of one's own mind after a vigorous session of excruciating nightmares or even some frightening dissection of the human psyche. Even still, there's alot mind-crossing metaphors that go back and forth against the backdropp of revelation that roots your references of darkness and light that make it appealing.

a powerful poem filled by sad images which very well expressed.

a powerful poem filled by sad images which very well expressed.

You express yourself with great certainty. Very powerful and insightful read. Emotion filled words that flow with wonderful word usage and imagery.

Your play of sounds and words - impression of darkness and fear makes this a thought provoking read - Thank you..

very nice poem wish I could have written it myself ever hear of the 'Ra' the Egyptian sun god? I make reference to him in my write 'god poem'

Man, this poem deserves a position higher than number 175. well done.

This is very dramatic and animated. You did an excellent job in description. A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn