My Dance Of Seven Veils Comments

My Soul is now free In its raw form of me Nothing to stop me dancing till eternity.....really a beautiful poem full of beauty and colors and rhythm and dancing steps. fine. thank u dear poetess. tony

The drums so very romantic, the dress, the dance, the stage, the music.......my soul is now free, dancing into the eternal world... very very nice poem. this is mystical and very poetic and romantic. thank you dear poetess

Nicely explained the Heart of a Girl/Woman! all in 7 colours! And yes it is Jaipur too!

Red is for passion Of sanguine attention beautiful poem thank you dear poetess

Life's Wheel Shaping Spins intrigued with colours colours written into life colours of personality vibrant seen vibrations; colours have personality different shapes revealed in layers dancing meaning tempo step time stripped; the silent statuette formed clay has subtile elusive layers; formed by demands life's wheel shaping spins moves reveals solid limbs; Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'My Dance Of Seven Veils' by the poet Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi.

Colours Woven Into Life Patterns intrigued with colours woven into life patterns colours of personality vibrant vibrations seen colours also have personality yet different shapes revealed in layers of meaning time stripped away the statuette formed clay has even more layers formed by demands of life's shaping keep dancing Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'My Dance Of Seven Veils' by the poet Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi.

I also was intrigued with colours and wrote colours into a poem once, but colours of personality and vibrant seen vibrations; your colours also have personality, yet different shapes revealed in layers of meaning stripped away, and yet the statuette formed clay has even more layers formed by demands of life's shaping. Keep dancing.10+

A poem with dancing words lovely write Nalini thank you for sharing such a lovely poem

This poem is the best I've read if yours, no question. I have added this to my favorite poems list, i now have 3 on that list of thousands if poems I've read. The feeling this piece gives is... :) its that good!