Wednesday, November 5, 2008

My Dad Comments

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My Dad
My dad could make you smile with out a cause
He was a great man and is very miss
He could rhyme with out a beat
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Erik Mcconniel
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Mimzy Sue 05 November 2008

sorry for the loss, it's hard to moved on without our loved ones but we have to...rite? Life goes on until our turn comes. Sometimes I wish I could atleast say 'Goodbye' to my dad before he left, never had the chance....... And I loved your poem.. Keep it up

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WOW i like this poem a lot you put some thought into it I was never close to my dad but this made me realize if i lost him how much i would be sad. Thank you for sharing Please if you get time can you read a few of my poems especially the poems called: 'Morning Sun' and 'Heaven Please' Thank you so much and God Bless!

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