My Dad Comments

AMRITA this one is ' A PERFECT TRIBUTE TO THE PARENTS ' duniya me wo log bahut achchhe hote hain jo apne mummy papa se itna pyar karte hain.

all people feel the same about their parents but u expressed ur feelings better than most poeple do

Awesome poetry even at this age. You have a great poetic talent. God bless you. The following lines are superb: you are the river for me which flows and (doesn't) stop I'm incomplete without you and mom you are just as the cloud (that) rains for every one no mater how one gets wet but its true you remove the sweat.... Keep it up.

Sentiments that are very well-expressed. Keep writng, Amrita.