Thursday, March 19, 2009

My Cup Comments

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I don't know what's going on
Something is completely wrong
Things just don't seem to add up
I'll take a sip from my cup
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Joscelyn Alderdice
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Eyan Desir 10 April 2009

Well, I Like the flow on this poem but, please what is this cup business is about?

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anurag duggal 01 April 2009

absolutely fantastic...........simplicity of your poems is breathtaking

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