Friday, June 15, 2012

My Crystal Heart Comments

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I carry my heart of crystal in my hands
That has been carelessly stolen by
My most trusted friend
Smashed into ten million pieces
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Rebecca Maiese
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Dr.subhendu Kar 23 June 2012

Is heartlessness worse than broken heartedness? .... beautiful story of love longing is yet lost, , ingeniously wrought over rune of ruination yet too poignant, thanks for sharing

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Saadat Tahir 16 June 2012

longwinding painful stuff Every time my crystal pieces are forced from my hands And break on the ground The pieces are smaller And I have nothing to give to the maker of my heart nice tc

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Ebi Robert 16 June 2012

Beautifully written with passion!

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