I fell in love
A kind never heard before.
I fell in love
A kind unsaid yet.
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Thy presence did 'My darkness' complete. And so, My love for life Did 'thy' darkness complete. What an unusual way of thinking...10 for that...Brishti Mazumdar
Thy presence did 'My darkness' complete. And so, My love for life Did 'thy' darkness complete. What an unusual way of thinking...10 for that...Brishti Mazumdar
what a splendid description of other side of love.....amazing.....good work
a cryptic love expressed as true as the darkness.your poem has a mysterious feel of the darkness.
i like to walk in rain rain...none can see my tears - charlie chaplin.... without darkness, what is the importance of light? they compliment............
Yeah at times when you feel depressed and do not want to share your feelings with anyone, 'darkness' does appear to be a companion, a silent listener. Very well written.10++
Your secret love is well expressed in poetic language here and the mystery of the verse comes over to the reader as very interesting......10 from Fay.
almost fall in love with your lines the moment they get in my eyes, i do enjoy reading your poem.
Lot of obscurity inside your write, Rahul...that makes the read interesting...the 'dark' images you create there are handsomely bright...10
an amazing and beautiful poem voted10 surya