Wednesday, November 9, 2016

My Cry Comments

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City in the sun I cry
I am in so much pain
Pain caused by those i host
Who will wipe my tears?
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LINET SABASTIAN
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Sylvaonyema Uba 27 February 2017

A state of disorder Lackadaisical behaviour A sense of love and harmony Is all that is needed. Nicely written piece of poem. Sylva

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Linet Sabastian 14 March 2017

Thank you Sylva

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 November 2016

I cry! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Linet Sabastian 11 November 2016

Thank you for your comment Edward.

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