My Cruel Princess Comments

Your poem is a love poem and I like it, because of the words and expression. Your thoughts have dominated your spelling, I think, due to be hurry in writing. Anyhow, the poem is nice to read.

Somnath, you have made a very good beginning. Your maiden poem about the maiden in the poem is truly enchanting, well begun half done. Expect more.Narayanan.

Good attempt. Keep writing more.

its more of a song than a poem. gud one though. keep going!

It is a very good poem Somnath, cudn't is spelled couldn't, and cos is spelled cause, but because is better. It sounds like you are very talented, keep up the good work.