Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Friday, October 14, 2011

My Countrymen Comments

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My countrymen want to make me mad
It seems they are very very bad
Whenever I become very sad
They seem to become very much glad
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Renu Kakkar 15 October 2011

nice thoughts..shown iin words

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Vipins Puthooran 15 October 2011

It's a good poem.. I like its rhyme pattern...nicely woven words

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Shadow Girl 14 October 2011

Interesting words..and u made them all rhyme..wow...nice. -SG

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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